Editing

I've been busy editing The Cup of My Blood. On the last pass I decided that major surgery is necessary ... I'm going to hack out a semi-major character that I had fun with but really isn't necessary to advance the storyline.

I may end up going back and doing the same with Little Birdies!. There's an entire subplot that is interesting but may end up weighing down the manuscript -- at least that's the feedback I've received from a couple of agents. I was always concerned that it might come to that, but I think I've figured out a way to unravel it safely.

And I've got The Last Bartender completely outlined. I'll get to writing after I get these other two off of my desk...